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The floor plan illustrates the transformation that occurred at a residential house

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The floor plan illustrates the transformation that occurred at a residential house. Overall, the main differences are the renovated building has one less internal wall, and the verandah outside the house is disappeared. Looking at the entry hall, there is no new upgrade. In addition, the socializing area on the left side of the house, the wall has been knocked down to create an opening space between the kitchen and the living room. The dining table is placed in the middle, and the cooking has been moved to the right-hand wall of the kitchen. Also, the door near the bathroom has been closed off. Turning to the right side of the house is the private area. The bathroom has been modified by moving the toilets to the middle of the room and replacing the bathtub with showers. In both bedrooms, the robes have been removed. The front bedroom is alert with a smaller window, while the window in the inside room has been displaced.
The floor plan illustrates the transformation that occurred at a residential
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house
.
Overall
, the main differences are the renovated building has one less internal wall, and the
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verandah
outside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
is disappeared
.

Looking at the entry hall, there is no new upgrade.
In addition
, the socializing area on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
, the wall has
been knocked
down to create an opening space between the kitchen and the living room. The dining table
is placed
in the middle, and the cooking has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the right-hand wall of the kitchen.
Also
, the door near the bathroom has
been closed
off.

Turning to the right side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
is the private area. The bathroom has
been modified
by moving the toilets to the middle of the room and replacing the bathtub with showers. In both bedrooms, the robes have
been removed
. The front bedroom is alert with a smaller window, while the window in the inside room has
been displaced
.
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