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The line graph illustrates the number of global tourist visits (by millions) in five parts of the world from 1990 to 2005 based on the information given by the United Nations World Tourism Organization in 2008.

The line graph illustrates the number of global tourist visits (by millions) in five parts of the world from 1990 to 2005 based on the information given by the United Nations World Tourism Organization in 2008. LBmVG
The line graph illustrates the number of global tourist visits (by millions) in five parts of the world from 1990 to 2005 based on the information given by the United Nations World Tourism Organization in 2008. Overall, all of the multinational tourist arrivals in different parts in the world shared a similar pattern, which grew up. Additionally, that of North America was the highest during the 15-year period. The international tourist arrivals in North America and Central and Eastern Europe experienced a numberous change after 15 years from 1990. That of North America stood at 70 millions, which was more than twice as many as the next popular places, Central and Estern Europe. While the figure of North America hit a peak at 90 millions in 2000 and slighty felt in the next 5 years, there was a double increase after a fuctuation in the number of tourists visting Central and Eastern Europe in 2005. The result is that the data in these two most popular parts were almost equal, with just under 90 millions. The other parts withnessed a less change. The data of Sub-Saharan Africa and South America were the lowest next to each other in 1990, which were around 10 millions tourists and rose in the next years. While the Sub-Saharan Africa global tourist visits up to 20 millions, the South America ones was the lowest in 2005. Beside that, the figure of South-East Asia also increased more than 20 millions after 15 years.
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visits (by
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in five
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of the world from 1990 to 2005 based on the information
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arrivals in
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in the world shared a similar pattern, which grew up.
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America was the highest during the
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15-year
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arrivals in
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America and Central and Eastern Europe experienced a
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after 15 years from 1990. That of
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America stood at 70
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, which was more than twice as
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as the
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popular places, Central and
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America hit a peak at 90
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in 2000 and
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were almost equal, with
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under 90 millions.

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and rose in the
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years. While the Sub-Saharan Africa global
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visits up to 20
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, the South America ones was the lowest in 2005. Beside that, the figure of South-East Asia
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of global tourist visits (by millions) in five parts of the world from 1990 to 2005 based on the information given by the United Nations World Tourism Organization in 2008.

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