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Below figure shows temperature of 3 different countries.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The above graph demonstrates the average of annual temperatures and total hours of sunshine portrayed by London, New York and Sydney. Both London and New York have a four-season climate with New York’s extremity being more conspicuous. Sydney, on the other hand, has a gentle touch to its weather pattern and the weather is, therefore, breezy. When the total hours of sunshine are concerned, New York is the leader, with Sydney following and London being a struggler. Shifting to the chart, it is evident that London and New York are quite chilly with the former meandering around 10 degree Celsius during November and the latter with frosting 5 degree Celsius during January and February. When the spring approaches, the temperature gradually escalates to 23°C in London in summer and around 30◦C in New York.

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