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ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF WORKING FROM HOME

ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF WORKING FROM HOME 70QDk
Our work style has changed in recent years due to the pandemic and we have had to work from home. However, some people have not been able to work from home this year. Therefore, some people advocate working from home, on the other hand, some people believe that working from the workplace has advantages. Both opinions have too many advantages and disadvantages. I consider that we have developed according to the growth of the world. Thank you Thanks to technology and the internet there are now many advantages to working from home. People who work from home have flexibility in their schedules and do not spend time or money on transportation, which is known to be very tedious. In addition, employers also have a great advantage, by having people working from home, they do not spend money on the workplace or on rent, and that savings can be used for some other improvement. On the other hand, many people believe that working from home has disadvantages. When people work from home, employers can't check efficiency. But sadly there are also some jobs that cannot be done from home, e. g. police, doctor, they should be thanked during this pandemic era. In conclusion and like everything in life, working from home can have many advantages and disadvantages, people who work from home have flexibility and more freedom than people who work in an office, but also, people who are from the workplace or in the office can make friendships or connections that people who work from home could not, since they only live with their family, or are just themselves.
Our
work
style has
changed
in recent years due to the
pandemic and
we have had to
work
from home.
However
,
some
people
have not been able to
work
from home this year.
Therefore
,
some
people
advocate
working
from home,
on the other hand
,
some
people
believe that
working
from the workplace has advantages.

Both opinions have too
many
advantages
and disadvantages. I consider that we have developed according to the growth of the world. Thank
you


Thanks to technology and the internet there are
now
many
advantages
to
working
from home.
People
who
work
from home have flexibility in their schedules and do not spend time or money on transportation, which
is known
to be
very
tedious.
In addition
, employers
also
have a great
advantage
, by having
people
working
from home, they do not spend money on the workplace or on rent, and that savings can be
used
for
some
other improvement.

On the other hand
,
many
people
believe that
working
from home has disadvantages. When
people
work
from home, employers can't
check
efficiency.
But
sadly
there are
also
some
jobs that cannot
be done
from home,
e. g.
police, doctor, they should
be thanked
during this pandemic era.

In conclusion
and like everything in life,
working
from home can have
many
advantages
and disadvantages,
people
who
work
from home have flexibility and more freedom than
people
who
work
in an office,
but
also
,
people
who
are from the workplace or in the office can
make
friendships or connections that
people
who
work
from home could not, since they
only
live
with their family, or are
just
themselves.
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