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The line graph illustrates information about how many tourists traveled to Caribbean island over the given period from 2010 to 2010.

The line graph illustrates information about how many tourists traveled to Caribbean island over the given period from 2010 to 2010. qRGxX

The line graph illustrates information about how many tourists traveled to Caribbean island over the given period from 2010 to 2010. it is obvious that there were upward trend all of three figures however visitors staying on both cruise ship and island increased gradually while the figure for total experienced a dramatic rise over the given period in question. When it comes to details as regards the number of visitors staying on cruise stood at about 0. 3 and fluctuated by 2013 after that in the following 5 years this figure was followed by considerable growth reaching its peak point at 2 million at the end of the period. In contrast to this pattern, visitors staying on the island started at approximately 0. 7 million, but remain stable by 2011 then increased significantly by 2013. Then figure again leveled out until the end of the period.

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