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city hospital layout comparision between 2010 and 2007

city hospital layout comparision between 2010 and 2007 5LQKQ

The maps compare a city hospital layout as it was in 2010 with its previous design in the year 2007. At first glance, 2007’s features with most relevant changes were the parking lot and the bus stops at the Hospital Rd. In terms of parking facilities, whereas the city hospital had a shared staff and public car park in 2007 at the right side of the Hospital rd, the hopsital set up two differenciated parking lots in the modern development at 2010. In particular, the previous car park was assigned for exclusive use of staff while a bigger space was built on the eastern side of the Hospital. Regarding public transport operation, the oldest Hospital Road had six locations to take the bus which were cleared by including a bus station in the western side of the roadway. This new bus facility was connected by two roandabouts with the City Road and Hospital.

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 of staff while a bigger space was built
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Hospital
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