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The line graph illustrates how much electricity (kilowatt hours ) was generated from wind power in four different countries from 2000 to 2012.The numbers are given in billions. Overall, the USA was country which generated the highest quantity of electricity from wind power while figures for India accounted for lowest throughout the period. Interestingly , the amount for all countries' electricity sharply changed in comparison with their former positions. At the beginning of the period , all four countries’ produced the amount of electricity made up around 2 kilowatt hours. By the next six year, There had been a insignificant growth to around 5 kilowatt hours at the identical amount of electricity in both India and chine before the figures of those witnessed a sharp climb to 40 and just under 100 kilowatt hours between 2006 and 2012 respectively. In detail , the quantity of generating electricity in similarly both the USA and Germany began increasing moderately by around 18 kilowa

The line graph illustrates how much electricity (kilowatt hours ) was generated from wind power in four different countries from 2000 to 2012. The numbers are given in billions. Overall, the USA was country which generated the highest quantity of electricity from wind power while figures for India accounted for lowest throughout the period. Interestingly, the amount for all countries' electricity sharply changed in comparison with their former positions. At the beginning of the period, all four countries’ produced the amount of electricity made up around 2 kilowatt hours. By the next six year, There had been a insignificant growth to around 5 kilowatt hours at the identical amount of electricity in both India and chine before the figures of those witnessed a sharp climb to 40 and just under 100 kilowatt hours between 2006 and 2012 respectively. In detail, the quantity of generating electricity in similarly both the USA and Germany began increasing moderately by around 18 kilowa oRpL3
The line graph illustrates how much electricity (kilowatt hours ) was generated from wind power in four different countries from 2000 to 2012. The numbers are given in billions. Overall, the USA was country which generated the highest quantity of electricity from wind power while figures for India accounted for lowest throughout the period. Interestingly, the amount for all countries' electricity sharply changed in comparison with their former positions. At the beginning of the period, all four countries’ produced the amount of electricity made up around 2 kilowatt hours. By the next six year, There had been a insignificant growth to around 5 kilowatt hours at the identical amount of electricity in both India and chine before the figures of those witnessed a sharp climb to 40 and just under 100 kilowatt hours between 2006 and 2012 respectively. In detail, the quantity of generating electricity in similarly both the USA and Germany began increasing moderately by around 18 kilowatt hours. Having reached a peak to about 140 kilowatt was the amount for the USA, there was a minimal rise in the amount of electricity in India in 2012, to just under 100 kilowatt. (Mukhammadali )
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from wind power while figures for India accounted for lowest throughout the period.
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sharply
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made up around 2
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. By the
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in India in 2012, to
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates how much electricity (kilowatt hours ) was generated from wind power in four different countries from 2000 to 2012. The numbers are given in billions. Overall, the USA was country which generated the highest quantity of electricity from wind power while figures for India accounted for lowest throughout the period. Interestingly, the amount for all countries' electricity sharply changed in comparison with their former positions. At the beginning of the period, all four countries’ produced the amount of electricity made up around 2 kilowatt hours. By the next six year, There had been a insignificant growth to around 5 kilowatt hours at the identical amount of electricity in both India and chine before the figures of those witnessed a sharp climb to 40 and just under 100 kilowatt hours between 2006 and 2012 respectively. In detail, the quantity of generating electricity in similarly both the USA and Germany began increasing moderately by around 18 kilowa

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