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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 PV752
The charts give data on the UK graduate and postgraduate scholars’ jobs excluding full-time work after graduated from college in the year 2008. Overall, the number of the UK graduates and postgraduates doing further study reached the highest peak, while the lowest amount was observed in voluntary work during the time. In detail, the quantity of the UK graduate students constituted 10 times more than postgraduate scholars throughout the time period. At the beginning, graduates who chose further study made up 29665out of 30000, whereas this figure for postgraduates accounted for 2725 out of 3000. On the other hand, the quantity of graduates doing part-time work nearly halved in 2008 (17735), however this segment for postgraduates accounted for 2535 out of 3000 in the year 2008. Unemployment scholars was equal to 16235, hence, this figure for postgraduates decreased 10 times, amounting to 1625. The minimum amount became 3500 out of 30000 graduates in voluntary work. This indicator for post graduates became 345 and showed the downward trend during the year.
The charts give data on the UK
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and
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scholars’ jobs excluding full-time
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work
after graduated from college in the year 2008.

Overall
, the number of the UK
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graduates
and
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postgraduates
doing
further
study reached the highest peak, while the lowest amount
was observed
in voluntary
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work
during the time.

In detail, the quantity of the UK
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graduate
students constituted 10 times more than
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postgraduate
scholars throughout the time period. At the beginning,
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graduates
who chose
further
study made up 29665out of 30000, whereas this figure for
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postgraduates
accounted for 2725 out of 3000.
On the other hand
, the quantity of
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graduates
doing part-time
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work
nearly
halved in 2008 (17735),
however
this segment for
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postgraduates
accounted for 2535 out of 3000 in the year 2008. Unemployment scholars was equal to 16235,
hence
, this figure for
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postgraduates
decreased 10 times, amounting to 1625. The minimum amount became 3500 out of 30000
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graduates
in voluntary
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work
. This indicator for post
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graduates
became 345 and
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showed
the downward trend during the year.
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IELTS academic The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

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