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The level of water in reservoirs (% of maximum) in six Australian cities in October 2019 and October 2010

The level of water in reservoirs (% of maximum) in six Australian cities in October 2019 and October 2010 MBeg6
The bar chart illustrates the maximum proportion of water in various reservoirs in Australian cities, namely Perth, Darwin, Canberra, Melbourne, Sydney, and Brisbane in a year starting from October 2009. As can be inferred in the graph, the figure of all the reservoirs witnessed an upward tendency with the exception of that of Perth. Moreover, out of all the cities examined, Brisbane registered the highest point within a year period. At the initial, the amount of water in Perth container was 51%, then experienced a decrease of 50% after one year. A reverse tendency was seen by the Darwin lake, which rose moderately from 75% to 80%. Likewise, there was a noticeable increase of water in Canberra which was of a half to nearly three quarters within the same timespan. Witnessing the similar pattern, the reserved water in Melbourne and in Brisbane climbed from 35% to 45% and from 75% to 100%, respectively. Conversely, the figure of Sydney's water stayed unchanged throughout the given timescale.
The bar chart illustrates the maximum proportion of
water
in various reservoirs in Australian cities,
namely
Perth, Darwin, Canberra, Melbourne, Sydney, and Brisbane in a year starting from October 2009.

As can
be inferred
in the graph, the figure of all the reservoirs witnessed an upward tendency
with the exception of
that of Perth.
Moreover
, out of all the cities examined, Brisbane registered the highest point within a year period.

At the initial, the amount of
water
in Perth container was 51%, then experienced a decrease of 50% after one year. A reverse tendency was
seen
by the Darwin lake, which rose
moderately
from 75% to 80%.
Likewise
, there was a noticeable increase of
water
in Canberra which was of a half to
nearly
three quarters within the same
timespan
.

Witnessing the similar pattern, the reserved
water
in Melbourne and in Brisbane climbed from 35% to 45% and from 75% to 100%,
respectively
.
Conversely
, the figure of Sydney's
water
stayed unchanged throughout the
given
timescale.
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IELTS academic The level of water in reservoirs (% of maximum) in six Australian cities in October 2019 and October 2010

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