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The line graph gives number of tourist who visit the Caribbean İsland from 2010 to 2017. This graphs also gives figures in five category

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The line graph gives number of tourist who visit the Caribbean İsland from 2010 to 2017. This graphs also gives figures in five category (total visitors, visitors staying on island and visitors on cruise ship). Ovarall, the number of the total tourists are increased dramatically over the period, İn 2010 number of visitors was 1 million and reached until 3. 5 millions in 2017. When comes to the specific categories. The visiters staying on cruise ships just under 0. 5 millions people in 2010, after that the numbers of visitors went up unstabil until 2013. Moreover, demand of this category rose consistenly and seen peak by 2 million people in 2017. Turning to visitors staying on island; as the other categories the number of visitors is low in 2010 by almost 0. 75 million people. But, this number of tourist in this groups raise until 2013 and 2017. To sum up, number of visitors in all kind of groups increased over time and seen their peak in 2017. The lowest number seen in 2010.
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