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The graph shows overseas visitors who came to the UK from 1989 and 2009.

The graph shows overseas visitors who came to the UK from 1989 and 2009. DqX3E

The rendered line graph reveals information about the international traveller who came to the UK for three distinct purposes namely business, holiday as well as meeting with kith and kin over the period of a decade. Overview, it is clear that majority of visitors visit the Britain for the sake of holiday; however, minority was accounted for meeting with colleagues as well as relatives in the end of the year. As can be inferred from the graph that the UK visitor was surged slightly caused by meeting with kith and kin from 1989 to 2007. Moreover, in the initial year, number of business travellers was obtained as 5 millions but, in the following two years it was declined by 1 million then it had shown small variation pattern including during 2009 it was rose by 2 millions as compared to the beginning year. Turning to the next information, UK visitors remained leveled off till 1989 after that it had reached at zenith in both 1894 and 2009 years which was about 9 millions while in 2009, it was decreased by more than 3 millions for business motive.

The rendered line graph reveals information about the international Possible spelling mistake found.travelertravelled
traveller
 who came to the UK for three distinct purposes namely
 business, holiday as well
 as meeting with kith and kin over the period of a decade.

Overview, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that majority of visitors visit the Britain for the sake of holiday; however
, minority was accounted
 for meeting with colleagues as well
 as relatives in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year.

As can be inferred
 from the graph that the UK visitor was surged
slightly
 caused by meeting with kith and kin from 1989 to 2007. Moreover
, in the initial year, number of business Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
was obtained
 as 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, in the following two years it was declined
 by 1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 then it had shown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 variation pattern including during 2009 it was rose by 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 as compared to the beginning year.

Turning to the next
 information, UK visitors remained leveled off till 1989 after that it had reached at zenith in both 1894 and 2009 years which was about 9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 while in 2009, it was decreased
 by more than 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 for business motive. 