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The line graph gives an account on average use of social networking sites such as Twitter and Facebook within the Australia.

The line graph gives an account on average use of social networking sites such as Twitter and Facebook within the Australia. YB39Q
The line graph gives an account on average use of social networking sites such as Twitter and Facebook within the Australia. The data is provided in number of times these sites used. -Overall, the graph elucidates an average use of these sites by an individual person per week during time span of five years from 2012 to 2016. The Facebook usage was high in 3rd year, while the Twitter was used more during fifth year. -In 2012, during the first year both sites were used around 22 to 24 times. The usage of twitter in the next two years till 2014 was gradually declined about 10 times then 2012, whereas the use of Facebook had been inclined upto 30 for the next two years. Furthermore, Facebook utilization remained stable for the next one year and then surged nearly to 34. -After 2014, the twitter operation rose up about 3 times (approximately 14) and then peaked out at 35 in the next year 2016. Finally, in the last year twitter outweighed Facebook utilization.
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span of five years from 2012 to 2016. The Facebook usage was high in 3rd
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, while the Twitter was
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around 22 to 24
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. The usage of twitter in the
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two years till 2014 was
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two years.
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one
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and then surged
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(approximately 14) and then peaked out at 35 in the
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2016.
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twitter outweighed Facebook utilization.

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