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the charts below compare Australian government investments in various energy sectors and the share of electricity generated by those energies.

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The two charts below illustrate the government investments in different energy categories in Australia and the comparison of the amount of electricity produced by those energies by percent. Overall, the Australian government made the highest investment in the Wind sector, followed by nuclear and the other categories. In contrast, the natural gas sector had the smallest percentage, followed by two sources that are solar and coal. Although the coal sector had one of the lowest rates in the investments chart, it had a significant figure out of all of the produced electricity values from sources in the second chart, followed by natural gas and the nuclear categories. The smallest proportions in the second chart were for wind and solar sectors while the energy produced from other sources were not shown in the chart. Comparing the investments with the generation, even though the wind sector had the highest proportion in the first chart with 42% in the second chart the sector had only 2%. Similar to that the coal sector had one of the lowest percentages of the first chart with 10% while it had covers nearly half of the second chart with 48%. To compare the rates of natural gas, solar and nuclear categories were likely had no significant difference between the two charts. In terms of natural gas, the percentage was 6% in investments and 27% the generation. Similarly, the proportions of solar and the nuclear categories went from 8% to 1% and from 21% to 22% respectively.
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in the Wind
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had the smallest percentage, followed by two sources that are
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and coal. Although the coal
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had one of the lowest rates in the
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, followed by
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and the nuclear
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were for wind and
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while the energy produced from other sources were not shown in the chart.

Comparing the
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with 48%. To compare the rates of
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were likely had no significant difference between the two
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, the percentage was 6% in
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and 27% the generation.
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went from 8% to 1% and from 21% to 22%
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.
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