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The line graph directs the proportion of overseas visitors to three areas in a European country over 20 years.

The line graph directs the proportion of overseas visitors to three areas in a European country over 20 years. eKg8A

The line graph directs the proportion of overseas visitors to three areas in a European country over 20 years. Overall, it can be noted that there were different trends in the three destinations of overseas travelers. The people who went to the coast were the highest figure in three unfamiliar areas. From 1987 to 1992, there was a steady decrease to about 5, 000 visitors. It was not valuable because this figure rose dramatically from about 35, 0000 to 75, 0000 people, and it reached a peak in 2007. On the other hand, the number of visitors to mountains rose gradually to around 10, 000 within five years from 1987 to 1992, and then, it leveled off during the period between 1997 and 2002. During the last five years period, this figure increased slightly to about 35, 000 visitors. At lakes, the visitor numbers rose sharply from 10, 000 to 75, 000 between 1987 and 2002. But from 2002 to 2007, there was a significant decrease to about 25, 000 visitors. During the period, we can see clearly the number of visitors to the lakes reached the most distinguished figure in 2002, it was as high as the traveler's proportion to the coast in 2007. It was evident the coast was the most popular destination in a European country from 1987 to 2007.

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visitors
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