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The charts below present a picture of recent, and predicted, trends in the percentage of single parent families headed by women and men in the UK.

The charts below present a picture of recent, and predicted, trends in the percentage of single parent families headed by women and men in the UK. PWq5d
The given bar chart shows the recent data and predicted data in the different percentage of single parent families headed by women and men in the UK. These data are represent in the years of 2000 to 2030 and it illustrates between two different age groups, one is under 60 and the people who are over 60 years. Overall, the single parent families headed by women under 60 years will see a consistent increase over the given years whereas the trend is different in mens, families taken care by mens over 60 years is more in the given years. Firstly, the families led by women uner 60 years was around 3 families in 2000 and seen a consistent increase till 2015 and remains stable until 2020, where both 2015 and 2020 has seen around 4 times increase in families than in 2000. It is forecasted that in 2025 and 2030 there will more than 12 women headed who age under 60 years. One important trend to note is that there are more single parent families headed by women under 60 than over 60 years in the given years. Secondly, single families taken care by men over 60 years are dominant in most of the years except for 2025 and 2020 in contrast to men less than 60 years. There is also a consistent increase in the family led my men under the age 60 is predicted to have a consistent increase till 2030.
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