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The line graph depicts the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2018 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2018 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. oXqB
The line graph illustrates the number of borrowed books from different libraries over a four-month period in 2014 and the pie chart shows the proportion of the categories. Overall, it can be seen that the majority of books were borrowed from Rye slip and Sutton libraries over time frame and it is noted that fiction books were the most popular. se In June, the number of books borrowed from Rye Slip and Sutton Wood were 300 and 250 relatively. During this month West Eaton and Church Mount lent only 50 books aech. Nevertheless, there was a dramatic and staedy fall in the number of books from Rye Slip library over the four months and it was just175 in September. Backwards, this trend was reserved for West Eaton and Church Mount libraries, which experienced a gradual
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libraries over a four-month period in 2014 and the pie chart
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from Rye slip and Sutton libraries over time frame and it
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were the most popular.
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In June, the number of
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borrowed from Rye Slip and Sutton Wood were 300 and 250
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. During this month West Eaton and Church Mount lent
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from Rye Slip library over the four months and it was just175 in September.

Backwards, this trend
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IELTS academic The line graph depicts the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2018 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

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