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The line graph demonstrates the quantities of goods transported by road, water, rail, and pipeline in the UK. During 1974 till 2002.

The line graph demonstrates the quantities of goods transported by road, water, rail, and pipeline in the UK. During 1974 till 2002. GlVQQ
The line graph demonstrates the quantities of goods transported by road, water, rail, and pipeline in the UK. During 1974 till 2002. Overall, goods transported in the UK using different modes had observed a gradual increase over the years. With some fluctuation in between. In 1974, the Most amount of goods transferred were by road with over 70 million tonnes. While on the other side, the least mode of transport used was the pipeline with just about 2 million tonnes in the UK. Which later saw a gradual rose over the course of 8 years where it reached 17 million and later observed a plateau till half-past 1990-1994. And later repeated the same pattern till the end of 2002. Where it just surpassed 20 million tonnes. While on the other hand, water & rail were almost the same in 1974. But later observed incline and decline in the number of goods transported respectively. Where the number of goods transported by water was around 60 million tonnes constantly in between 1982 and 1990. On the other hand, rail mode decrease continued where it reached its lowest point between 1994 and 1998. But later increased and end up around 21. 5 million tonnes in the year 2002.
The line graph demonstrates the quantities of
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goods
transported by road, water, rail, and pipeline in the UK. During 1974 till 2002.

Overall
,
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goods
transported in the UK using
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different
modes had observed a gradual increase over the years. With
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fluctuation in between.

In 1974, the Most amount of
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transferred were by road with over 70
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million
tonnes. While on the other side, the least mode of transport
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used
was the pipeline with
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just
about 2
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million
tonnes in the UK. Which
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later
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a gradual rose over the course of 8
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years where
it reached 17
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million
and
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observed a plateau till half-past 1990-1994. And
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repeated the same pattern till the
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of 2002.
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Where
it
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surpassed 20
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, water & rail were almost the same in 1974.
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But
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later
observed incline and decline in the number of
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transported
respectively
. Where the number of
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transported by water was around 60
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million
tonnes
constantly
in between 1982 and 1990.
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, rail mode decrease continued where it reached its lowest point between 1994 and 1998.
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But
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increased and
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up around 21. 5
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tonnes in the year 2002.
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IELTS academic The line graph demonstrates the quantities of goods transported by road, water, rail, and pipeline in the UK. During 1974 till 2002.

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