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The given bargraph reveals the information about the expenditure of UK and France on consumer goods in 2010. they show us that from the graph"cars took the first place from the expenditure of consumer goods rather than another product. It is apperent that cars was the highest throughout the period, France Were used 400, 000 pounds and UK spent 450, 000 pounds in 2010. In addition to thai, the perfume was the lowest of UK by using around 150, 0n0 pounds and cameras was the least of France that were spent 150, o00 pounds in that year. Moving to cameras, there was noticeable different due to in UK they were spended spent 350, ooo pounds but in France they used only 150, 000 pounds. Computers maintained the same level the two countries not much different. Overall, cars were still the highest of two countries in 2010 but in France the graph was less and less from cars to cameras.

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given
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bargraph
 reveals the information about the expenditure of UK and

France on consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in 2010.

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they
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show
 us that

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cars took the first
 place from the expenditure of consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods


rather
 than another product.

It is Possible spelling mistake found.apparent
apperent
 that cars was the highest throughout the period, France

Were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 400, 000 pounds and UK spent 450, 000 pounds in 2010.

In addition
 to Possible spelling mistake found.Thaithattheirtheythanthief
thai
, the perfume was the lowest of UK by using around

150, 0n0 pounds and cameras was the least of France that were spent


150, o00 pounds in that year.

Moving to cameras, there was noticeable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 due to in UK

they were Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "spent", the past tense form of the verb 'spend'?spentspenderupendedpendeds pended
spended


spent

350, Possible spelling mistake found.toozoowooboofoogoo
ooo
 pounds This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in France they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 150, 000 pounds.

Computers maintained the same level the two countries not much This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
.

Overall
, cars were still
 the highest of two countries in 2010 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but


in France the graph was less and less from cars to cameras. 