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The bar chart and table illustrate the proportion of families having high-speed internet connection in five nations, as well as the change over two years, from 2001 to 2002.

The bar chart and table illustrate the proportion of families having high-speed internet connection in five nations, as well as the change over two years, from 2001 to 2002. KGJw3
The bar chart and table illustrate the proportion of families having high-speed internet connection in five nations, as well as the change over two years, from 2001 to 2002. As can be observed, during those years, the percentage of households with high-speed internet access was greatest in South Korea and the United States. In addition, Britain had the largest increase in the number of households having high-speed internet connection. In 2001, 11. 2 percent of South Korean homes had high-speed internet connection, compared to 9. 3 percent of American households. One year later, the number of US individuals with high-speed internet climbed by 170 percent, reaching 25. 11 percent of people, the highest percentage among all countries studied during that time period. South Korea, on the other hand, saw a far slower pace of growth, with only 20%. In Germany, Switzerland, and the United Kingdom, high-speed internet was less widespread, with just 0. 35 percent of homes having a high-speed connection. Over the course of the year, all three nations experienced large gains, with Germany and Switzerland seeing rises of 80% and 120 percent, respectively. Meanwhile, with a 230 percent rise in high-speed internet connections, Britain led the way.
The bar chart and table illustrate the proportion of families having
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over two years, from 2001 to 2002.

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internet access was greatest in South Korea and the United States.
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high-speed
internet connection.

In 2001, 11. 2
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, compared to 9. 3
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of American households. One
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later, the number of US individuals with
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internet climbed by 170
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, reaching 25. 11
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, the highest percentage among all countries studied during that time period. South Korea,
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In Germany, Switzerland, and the United Kingdom,
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internet was less widespread, with
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0. 35
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of homes having a
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. Over the course of the
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, all three nations experienced large gains, with Germany and Switzerland seeing rises of 80% and 120
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,
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, Britain led the way.
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IELTS academic The bar chart and table illustrate the proportion of families having high-speed internet connection in five nations, as well as the change over two years, from 2001 to 2002.

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