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The chart shows the reasons for what percentage of people prefer to attend the arts from 20 years ago till today in the UK.

The chart shows the reasons for what percentage of people prefer to attend the arts from 20 years ago till today in the UK. R2MVW
The chart shows the reasons for what percentage of people prefer to attend the arts from 20 years ago till today in the UK. The biggest reason for attending the arts is their desire to see specific performers or artists. The second important reason is for special occasion or celebration. The third most important reason is for accompanying their children and lastly due to work or business. 20 years ago people prefer to visit the arts more due to special occasions as compared to the trend today. People visit nowadays more in arts due to work or business as compared to 20 years ago also it is the same for accompanying children. There is not much percentage difference for people going to attend arts for the desire to see a specific performance in today as compared to 20 years ago. In conclusion, the main reason people almost the same number of people in total attend arts as from 20 years ago today but the maximum reason is due to desire to see specific performance for all the years.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the reasons for what percentage of people prefer to attend the arts from 20 years ago till today in the UK.

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