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The line graph demonstrates that the consumption of the spreads between 1981 and 2007.

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The line graph demonstrates that the consumption of the spreads between 1981 and 2007. The X axis gives details about years and y axis is about grams. These spreads are margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and butter. The butter’s gram increased from 1981 to 1987. The butter’s peak point was at 1987. After the peak point was 160 grams, the butter significantly decreased until 2007. The highest grams value belongs to butter in the graph. There is not any knowledge about low fat and reduced spreads in the graph before 1997. Low fat and reduced spreads rose from 1997 to 2002. After 2002, it sharply decreased. Between 1993-1997, the grams value levelled off. Margarine decreased from 1981 to 1988 and increased until 1993. Grams of Margarine was 100 between 1993-1998. The lowest point of margarine was 40 at 2007. The graph illustrates that the consumption of butter, margarine and low fat & reduced spreads from 1981 to 2007. Grams of all of them decreased from 2002 to 2007.
The line
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demonstrates that the consumption of the
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spreads
between 1981 and 2007. The X axis gives
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details
about years and
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y axis
is about
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grams
. These
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spreads
are
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margarine
,
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
and butter.

The
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butter’s
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gram
increased from 1981 to 1987. The
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butter’s
peak point was at 1987. After the peak point was 160
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grams
, the
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butter
significantly
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decreased
until 2007. The highest
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grams
value belongs to
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butter
in the
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graph
. There is not any knowledge about
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
in the
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graph
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before
1997.
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Low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
rose from 1997 to 2002. After 2002, it
sharply
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decreased
. Between 1993-1997, the
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grams
value levelled off.
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Margarine
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decreased
from 1981 to 1988 and increased until 1993.
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Grams
of
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Margarine
was 100 between 1993-1998. The lowest point of
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margarine
was 40 at 2007.

The
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graph
illustrates that the consumption of
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butter
,
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margarine
and
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low
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
from 1981 to 2007.
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Grams
of all of them
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decreased
from 2002 to 2007.
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