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The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line chart illustrates the ratio of visitors who came to United Kingdom in specific four places of Brighton between 1980 from 2010. Overall, it is lucid that the most proportion of tourists came to England in pavilion whereas the least visitors went to pier in the given period. It is crystal clear from the chart that in 1980, only 10% people came to pier while the ratio of visitors was pick up and decrease from 1985 to 2005. Afterthan it went up over around 20% till 2010. Moreover, the percentage of visitors went to art gallary almost one-quarter in 1985. Afterthan, it was down in 1990 and never went up in other years. It is aqua clear from the chart that in pavilion, there was leap visitors came in 1995. In the next five years visitors came to pavilion decline. Only 30% visitors came to pavilion till to 2010. 30% tourists went to festival in 1980 whereas it was down around one-fourth percent visitors went to festival.
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to England in
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to pier in the
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from the chart that in 1980,
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to pier while the ratio of
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was pick up and decrease from 1985 to 2005.
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up over around 20% till 2010.
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to art
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almost one-quarter in 1985.
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up in other years. It is aqua
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from the chart that in
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, there was leap
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visitors
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in 1995. In the
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till to 2010. 30% tourists
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to festival in 1980 whereas it was down around one-fourth percent
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

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