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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. wo9n
The table provides information on the fast-food eating habits of the people in Melbourne, Australia. The five major types of fast food items consumed by the population are hamburger, fried chicken, salads, fried rice and noodles. The data is recorded for the year 2005 and the present with a prediction for the year 2025 For the year 2005, hamburgers and fried chicken was a largely popular choice with the volume eaten being around 40 units. The least popular items were noodles and fried rice which were barely up to 10 units. This is the same for the present year too, where hamburgers and fried chicken were extensively consumed at 38 units and 37 units respectively followed by salads at 15 units. The only item which will see a significant rise in its consumption by 2025 is salad which is recorded to be consumed at 15 units in the present times and is forecasted to be more than doubled at around 40 units. Overall, it can seem that hamburgers and fried chicken remain a common preferenc among individuals throughout the documented duration. Quite a people are predicted to improve this eating habits by 2025.
The table provides information on the
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-food eating habits of the
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people
in Melbourne, Australia. The five major types of
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fast
food items consumed by the population are hamburger,
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fried
chicken, salads,
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fried
rice and noodles.
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The
data
is recorded
for the
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year
2005 and the present with a prediction for the
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year
2025

For the
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year
2005, hamburgers and
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fried
chicken was a
largely
popular choice with the volume eaten being around 40
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units
. The least popular items were noodles and
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fried
rice which were
barely
up to 10 units.

This is the same for the present
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year
too, where hamburgers and
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fried
chicken were
extensively
consumed at 38
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units
and 37
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units
respectively
followed by salads at 15 units.

The
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only
item which will
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see
a significant rise in its consumption by 2025 is salad which
is recorded
to
be consumed
at 15
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units
in the present times and
is forecasted
to be more than doubled at around 40 units.

Overall
, it can seem that hamburgers and
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fried
chicken remain a common
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preferenc
among individuals throughout the documented duration. Quite a
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people
are predicted
to
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improve
this eating habits by 2025.
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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