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The line graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who went to 3 different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007..

The line graph illustrates the ranges of overseas visitors who went to 3 varying areas in a European country over a period of 20 years. The numbers are shown as thousands. Overall, the coast and the lakes had made up the most visited areas chosen by visitors during a given time. However, the pattern was a complete reverse when it comes to the mountains. It can be seen from the figure that the number of visitors in coastal location were 40, 000 in 1987. Otherwise, there was a slight downturn by 1992 for this pattern. By contrast of this situation, a sharp surge of visits continued with approximately 75, 000 individuals until 2007. At the beginning of the given timeline, the rates for the lakes had been occurred as 10, 000 visitors. By 2002, the indicators rose up to around 80, 000, but there was a radical decrease between 2002 and 2007. It is noticeable from the data that the proportion of pupils for the mountains fluctuated. From 1987 to 1992, visits to these parts of a European country dipped at 20, 000. Furthermore, at the end of the period, a gradual upsurge had seen that was up to 35, 000 people.

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visitors
 who went to 3 varying areas in a European country over a period of 20 years. The numbers are shown
 as thousands.

Overall
, the coast and the lakes had made up the most visited areas chosen by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 during a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time. However
, the pattern was a complete reverse when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
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 to the mountains.

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seen
 from the figure that the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 in coastal location were 40, 000 in 1987. Otherwise
, there was a slight downturn by 1992 for this pattern. By contrast of this situation, a sharp surge of visits continued with approximately 75, 000 individuals until 2007. At the beginning of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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 timeline, the rates for the lakes had been occurred
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visitors
. By 2002, the indicators rose up to around 80, 000, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was a radical decrease between 2002 and 2007.

It is noticeable from the data that the proportion of pupils for the mountains fluctuated. From 1987 to 1992, visits to these parts of a European country dipped at 20, 000. Furthermore
, at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period, a gradual upsurge had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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people
. 