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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015 eg7J
The line graph illustrates the Regional Household Recycle rates in the UK, Germany, France from 2005 to 2015. Generally, it is calibrated into percentages. Overall, it is observed that the recycle rates of Germany and the UK showed a significant increase over the years, while the percentage of recycling waste in France experienced a downward trend. In 2005, the recycling rates of the UK and Germany were nearly 35% and 20% respectively. Germany's rate went up sharply throughout the period exceeding France rates in 2009 and reaching almost 60% in the end of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of the UK grew to 40 percent in 2007 and remained steady until 2009. During 2007-2011 the proportion of recycled waste experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015. On the other hand, France has the highest recycled rates in 2005 when compared to these countries. However, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015, but France recycle rate was the lowest in the end of the period.
The line graph illustrates the Regional Household Recycle
rates
in the UK, Germany, France from 2005 to 2015.
Generally
, it
is calibrated
into percentages.

Overall
, it
is observed
that the recycle
rates
of Germany and the UK
showed
a significant increase over the years, while the percentage of recycling waste in France experienced a downward trend.

In 2005, the recycling
rates
of the UK and Germany were
nearly
35% and 20%
respectively
. Germany's
rate
went up
sharply
throughout the period exceeding France
rates
in 2009 and reaching almost 60% in the
end
of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of the UK grew to 40 percent in 2007 and remained steady until 2009. During 2007-2011 the proportion of recycled waste experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015.

On the other hand
, France has the highest recycled
rates
in 2005 when compared to these countries.
However
, it
dramatically
declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015,
but
France recycle
rate
was the lowest in the
end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015

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