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The line graph below shows the changes that took place in different crimes in Wales and England from 1970 to 2005.

The line graph below shows the changes that took place in different crimes in Wales and England from 1970 to 2005. J0NBa
The line graph compares Wales and England in term of home robbery, car theft and street robbery which were committed over a period of 35 years. It is clear that all lines shown in the graph experienced an upward trend throughout the whole period. The most dramatic increase was seen in the numbers of car theft between 1990 and 2005 while street robbery was carried out at least numbers. In 1970, 400. 000 car theft took place both in Wales and inEngland followed by a dramatic rise to a million 2 decades later. At the same time, the numbers of house robbery began at 200. 000, which then saw a gradual increase to 700. 000 whereas there was no data given about street robbery until 1990. There was a rapid growth in the figures of car theft in 1995 before plummeting to 1. 000. 000 at the end of the period. Similarly, the graph showed a slight decrease for the numbers of house robbery from 700. 000 in 1990 to 500. 000 in 2005. By contrast, the figure for street robbery rose steadily by 200. 000 in the final year.
The line graph compares Wales and England in term of home
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robbery
,
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car
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theft
and
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street
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robbery
which
were committed
over a period of 35 years.

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clear
that all lines shown in the graph experienced an upward trend throughout the whole period. The most dramatic increase was
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seen
in the numbers of
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car
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theft
between 1990 and 2005 while
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street
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robbery
was carried
out at least numbers.

In 1970, 400. 000
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car
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theft
took place both in Wales and
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inEngland
followed by a dramatic rise to a million 2 decades later. At the same time, the numbers of
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house
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robbery
began at 200. 000, which then
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saw
a gradual increase to 700. 000 whereas there was no data
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given
about
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street
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robbery
until 1990.

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car
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theft
in 1995
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before
plummeting to 1. 000. 000 at the
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end
of the period.
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, the graph
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showed
a slight decrease for the numbers of
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house
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robbery
from 700. 000 in 1990 to 500. 000 in 2005. By contrast, the figure for
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street
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robbery
rose
steadily
by 200. 000 in the final year.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the changes that took place in different crimes in Wales and England from 1970 to 2005.

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