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Crime in the UK and other countries

Crime in the UK and other countries eKPxx

A glance at the pie chart provided, reveals that male inmates are considerably more (96 percent) compared to female ones (only 4 percent). Also, a quick view of the graph tells us that at the age of 21, the maximum number of crimes occur for both gender types. It is absolutely clear that men do more wrong actions than women. In both categories, the rate of criminal activities increases by age until approximately 21 and after that, a steady decrease in convictions can be seen. The starting age for crime is about 10 for men offenders with a 2 percent contribution. While for women, this age is somewhere between 10 and 15. Middle-aged (approximately 17 to 40 years old) persons tend to do more crimes than others. Men never stop their criminal activities, whatever age they have. On the other hand, women's tendency to do bad stuff vanishes by aging. In conclusion, the amount of men offenders is drastically large compared to the group.

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