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The line graph below shows the average number of UK travellers in three various transport from 1970 to 2030.

The line graph below shows the average number of UK travellers in three various transport from 1970 to 2030. BgoA6
The polly line graph illustrates the proportion of three different types of transport like car, bus or train, which were use by average number of UK travelers During the period 1970 to 2030. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the number of visitors used bus moving in downward trend, while two other transport used by commuters in upward trend. To begin with, in 1970, the average number of riders used three transport, Which were start to stay the same level all over the time from 1970 to 1980. Next, car used by commuters shortly increased around 1980 to 2000. Afterwards, this figure rose sharply grew up two time all over the period. However, pagangers travel on Trains ratio slowly boost one time between 1970 and 2000. After that, this level stay the same path during the period 2000 to 2010 and dramatically high up from upcoming year 2030. Moving to more information analysis, UK busriders used bus start to stay the same way during 1970 to 1980. Subsequently, this figure rose decreased two time all over the period between 1980 and 2010. Finally, this ratio slightly least to the peak from 2010 to upcoming year 2030. Further more details, cars was Hughest used by owners more than bus or train in UK. Unfortunately, pasangers used bus was lower than car or train.
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line graph illustrates the proportion of three
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, bus or
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, which were
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use
by average number of UK travelers During the
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1970 to 2030.
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that, the number of visitors
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bus moving in downward trend, while two other transport
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used
by commuters in upward trend. To
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with, in 1970, the average number of riders
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used
three transport, Which were
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start
to stay the same level all over the
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time
from 1970 to 1980.
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,
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car
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used
by commuters shortly increased around 1980 to 2000. Afterwards, this figure rose
sharply
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time
all over the
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.
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,
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pagangers
travel on
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Trains
ratio
slowly
boost one
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time
between 1970 and 2000. After that, this level stay the same path during the
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period
2000 to 2010 and
dramatically
high up from upcoming year 2030. Moving to more information analysis, UK
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busriders
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used
bus
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start
to stay the same way during 1970 to 1980.
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time
all over the
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between 1980 and 2010.
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, this ratio
slightly
least to the peak from 2010 to upcoming year 2030.
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,
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cars
was
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by owners more than bus or
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in UK. Unfortunately,
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pasangers
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bus was lower than
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or
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.
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