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The information about the trends in economic growth and air pollution for Norway and China between 1990-2016 is depicted by the rendered line graphs. The data has been given in numbers. Overall, it can be seen that with the economical development in China, air pollution was growing rapidely. While, in Norway, both factors showed opposite ratio. In China, during 1990 to 1994, value of goods and services was higher than air pollution, approximately 1000 $US. However, with passing time smog in atmosphere was increased and reached at its peak in 2010 ( 58 PM2. 5), but in the end Price of domestic product surpassed amount of air pollution and reached nearly 7000 $US in 2016. In Norway, it is depicted that as economic growth was went up the air pollution was also increased. In 1990, the GDP of domestic things was 60000 $US and air pollution was just above the 90000 PM2. 5. Moreover, during 2000, both ratio intersect with each other. Furthermore, air pollution was cosiderably decreased and reached nearly 4 atmospheric particulate matter. While, prise of household product was 90000 $US in 2016.

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