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The chocolate production. write a summary report.

The chocolate production. write a summary report. 9aAE7
These pidtures shows how to chocolate is produced and what is the igredients nededed to make chocolates there have described a diagram with 10 steps. First step has described where were coca most grow, It is in South america, Africa and Indonesia. In the first pick the ripe red pods from the tree. Secondly cuts the pods and harvest white coca beans from it. And let fermented the beans from banan leaves fourth step is the beans are seperated out into the sun to be dried. Firstly filled the large sacks in sppecific weight. then, deliver to the factory by train lorry or any kind of transportation system. Eight step start with factory process, The coca beans are rosed by own in 360C. After that the put into crusing machin to remove outer shells. At the finaly, chocolate makes after pressed the inner part of the liquid chocolate. this is the process which cocoa bean became a chocolat.
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pidtures
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shows
how to chocolate
is produced
and what is the
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igredients
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nededed
to
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make
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chocolates
there have
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described
a diagram with 10 steps.

First
step has
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described
where were coca most grow, It is in
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South america
, Africa and Indonesia. In the
first
pick the ripe red pods from the tree.
Secondly
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cuts
the pods and harvest white coca
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beans
from it. And
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let
fermented the
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beans
from
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banan
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leaves
fourth step is the
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beans
are
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seperated
out into the sun to
be dried
.
Firstly
filled the large sacks in
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sppecific
weight.
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then
, deliver to the factory by train lorry or any kind of transportation system.

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Eight step
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start
with factory process, The coca
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beans
are
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rosed
by
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own
in 360C.
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that the put into
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crusing
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machin
to remove outer shells. At the
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finaly
, chocolate
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makes
after pressed the inner part of the liquid chocolate.
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this
is the process which cocoa
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bean
became a
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chocolat
.

IELTS academic The chocolate production. write a summary report.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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