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The chocolate production. write a summary report.

The chocolate production. write a summary report. 9aAE7
These pidtures shows how to chocolate is produced and what is the igredients nededed to make chocolates there have described a diagram with 10 steps. First step has described where were coca most grow, It is in South america, Africa and Indonesia. In the first pick the ripe red pods from the tree. Secondly cuts the pods and harvest white coca beans from it. And let fermented the beans from banan leaves fourth step is the beans are seperated out into the sun to be dried. Firstly filled the large sacks in sppecific weight. then, deliver to the factory by train lorry or any kind of transportation system. Eight step start with factory process, The coca beans are rosed by own in 360C. After that the put into crusing machin to remove outer shells. At the finaly, chocolate makes after pressed the inner part of the liquid chocolate. this is the process which cocoa bean became a chocolat.
These
pidtures
shows
how to chocolate
is produced
and what is the
igredients
nededed
to
make
chocolates
there have
described
a diagram with 10 steps.

First
step has
described
where were coca most grow, It is in
South america
, Africa and Indonesia. In the
first
pick the ripe red pods from the tree.
Secondly
cuts
the pods and harvest white coca
beans
from it. And
let
fermented the
beans
from
banan
leaves
fourth step is the
beans
are
seperated
out into the sun to
be dried
.
Firstly
filled the large sacks in
sppecific
weight.
then
, deliver to the factory by train lorry or any kind of transportation system.

Eight step
start
with factory process, The coca
beans
are
rosed
by
own
in 360C.
After
that the put into
crusing
machin
to remove outer shells. At the
finaly
, chocolate
makes
after pressed the inner part of the liquid chocolate.
this
is the process which cocoa
bean
became a
chocolat
.
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IELTS academic The chocolate production. write a summary report.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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