Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The bar chart depicts the three main reasons of land demolishment in four different continents, including Africa, Asia, Australia and Europe.

The bar chart depicts the three main reasons of land demolishment in four different continents, including Africa, Asia, Australia and Europe. yG3Kd
The bar chart depicts the three main reasons of land demolishment in four different continents, including Africa, Asia, Australia and Europe. Overall, the areas of land damage caused by breeding is the most, outweighs the other ones happened by tree-cutting and farming. Especially, in Africa and Europe, land for farming In terms of land usage in Australia and Europe, it witnesses the same pattern, which the areas for breeding is the highest number while the figures of farming land is the least, approximately 50 million hectares and 100 milion hectares, respectively. Particularly, in Australia, land for breeding accounted for roughly 200 million hectares, two times greater than the ones for tree-cutting. According to Africa and Asia, this two continents experienced the largest number of destroying land, over roughly 1000 million hectares each area. In addition, the figures of land for tree-cutting in Asia outweighs the total areas of land ruin in Australia or Europe.
The bar chart depicts the three main reasons of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
Possible spelling mistake found.
demolishment
in four
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
continents, including Africa, Asia, Australia and Europe.

Overall
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
damage caused by breeding is the most, outweighs the other ones happened by tree-cutting and farming.
Especially
, in Africa and Europe,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
for farming

In terms of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
usage in Australia and Europe, it witnesses the same pattern, which the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
for breeding is the highest number while the figures of farming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
is the least, approximately 50 million hectares and 100
Possible spelling mistake found.
milion
hectares,
respectively
.
Particularly
, in Australia,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
for breeding accounted for roughly 200 million hectares, two times greater than the ones for tree-cutting.

According to Africa and Asia, this two continents experienced the largest number of destroying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
, over roughly 1000 million hectares each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
.
In addition
, the figures of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
for tree-cutting in Asia outweighs the total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
land
ruin in Australia or Europe.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The bar chart depicts the three main reasons of land demolishment in four different continents, including Africa, Asia, Australia and Europe.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts