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The line chart provides the summary and reasons, why people relocate from the city to another by fifteen years period.

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The line chart provides the summary and reasons, why people relocate from the city to another by fifteen years period. There were given for reasons such as: employment, study, family/friends and adventure. We can see that adventure until 2050 increased considerably slightly, whereas other three items increased significantly. One item, which is called “study” from 12 to 16 years period dramatically increased between eighty five thousand and nighty thousand, where picked up with “employment”. However, “employment” until 2012-2014 period time rised with considdences, but after 2014 significantly fell. Furthermore item “family/friends every 5 year rised slightly, from 10. 000 until 20-22 thousand. To sum up four items, we can see that “adventure” and family/friends reasons between fifteen – years period, increased very slowly, whereas study from this period time too, rised terrificly. And only, “employment” item between 2012-2015 became dramatically increased.
The line chart provides the summary and reasons, why
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“employment”
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until 2012-2014
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IELTS academic The line chart provides the summary and reasons, why people relocate from the city to another by fifteen years period.

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