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The char below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The char below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. GB12
The following bar chart illustrates the export earnings of various product during the years 2015-2016 and the relevant table depicts the percentage of changes in each category in 2016 compared with 2015. Overall, there is a significant rise in export earnings in 2016 compared to 2015 expect for Gems and jewellery. In 2015, the export earnings from petroleum products are 60 billion US dollars and the same year the earnings from Engineered goods are slightly less to be around 58 billion US dollars. The subsequent year, the earnings rose gradually to 63 billion for petroleum products and 61 billion for engineered goods. On the other hand, export earnings on Agricultural products grew slightly from 31 billion to 32 billion by 2016. Furthermore, Textile export rose dramatically from 25 billion to 31 billion by 2016. During the same period, export earnings from Gems and jewellery has fell drastically from 44 billion to 41 billion in 2016. By 2016, the value of Textiles has grown significantly to 15. 24% and the value of Engineered goods have also rose to 8. 5%. During the same time, the value of petroleum products increased by 3% and agricultural products by 0. 81% which is negligible. On the contrary, the value of gems and jewellery has reduced by 5. 18%.
The following bar chart illustrates the
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earnings
of various
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product
during the years 2015-2016 and the relevant table depicts the percentage of
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changes
in each category in 2016 compared with 2015.

Overall
, there is a significant rise in
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export
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earnings
in 2016 compared to 2015
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expect
for Gems and
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jewellery
.

In 2015, the
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export
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earnings
from petroleum
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products
are 60
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billion
US dollars and the same year the
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earnings
from Engineered
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goods
are
slightly
less to be around 58
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billion
US dollars. The subsequent year, the
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earnings
rose
gradually
to 63
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billion
for petroleum
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products
and 61
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billion
for engineered
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goods
.
On the other hand
,
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export
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earnings
on Agricultural
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products
grew
slightly
from 31
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billion
to 32
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billion
by 2016.
Furthermore
, Textile
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export
rose
dramatically
from 25
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billion
to 31
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billion
by 2016. During the same period,
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export
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earnings
from Gems and
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jewellery
has
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fell
drastically
from 44
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billion
to 41
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billion
in 2016.

By 2016, the
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value
of Textiles has grown
significantly
to 15. 24% and the
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value
of Engineered
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goods
have
also
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rose
to 8. 5%. During the same time, the
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value
of petroleum
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products
increased by 3% and agricultural
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products
by 0. 81% which is negligible.
On the contrary
, the
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value
of gems and
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jewellery
has
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reduced
by 5. 18%.

IELTS academic The char below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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