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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. ggad

This figure illustrates the way in which bricks are manufactured for construction industry. Overall, there are seven stages in the process of making bricks and beginning with clay and culminating in delivery. Besides there are two ways of shaping it into rectangular form. The process of making bricks takes a lot of time in desiccation and cooling. In order to make bricks, clay has to be dug by excavator then it is ground into smaller pieces and mixed with sand and water. Once we get that compound, next stage is to form a shape of brick. This can be either done by wire cutting machine or moulding. When the bricks are shaped, they have to be dried for 24 - 48 hrs in a kiln which is heated at modest temperature, 200 - 980 degree celsius, then at high temperature, 870 - 1300 degree celsius. Thereafter, the hardened bricks need to be cooled down for 2 - 3 days at cooling chamber. After 72 hrs of cooling process is done, the package of bricks can be distributed to construction sites.

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bricks
are manufactured
 for construction industry.

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bricks
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a lot of
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make
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bricks
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has to
be dug
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 into smaller pieces and mixed with sand and water. Once we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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moulding
.

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bricks
are shaped
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be dried
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24 - 48
 hrs in a kiln which is heated
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celsius
, then at high temperature, Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.870 – 1300870–1300
870 - 1300
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celsius
. Thereafter, the hardened You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
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2 - 3
 days at cooling chamber. After 72 hrs of cooling process is done
, the package of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 can be distributed
 to construction sites. 