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The line chart gives information about the mean temperature per month in a year while the table demonstrates the number of annual hours of sunshine on average in London, New York and Sydney.

The line chart gives information about the mean temperature per month in a year while the table demonstrates the number of annual hours of sunshine on average in London, New York and Sydney. rYk2N
The line chart gives information about the mean temperature per month in a year while the table demonstrates the number of annual hours of sunshine on average in London, New York and Sydney. Overall, it is clear that the temperature of London and New York is warmer in the middle of the year while that of Sydney is the opposite and New York's total annual lighting time is the highest. It can be seen that the temperature in London is nearly 10ºC at the two months of the year, which doubles that in New York. After that, the figures for both countries rise gradually and hit a peak at 30ºC for New York and approximately 24ºC for London in July before showing a plunge until November with the same temperature ( about 10%). Meanwhile, the temperature in Sydney witness an opposite trend with a low of 15ºC in July and warming up at the beginning and the end of the year with around 25ºC. In term of sunshine duration, New York and Sydney have relatively similar figures with 2, 535 and 2, 473 hours, respectively while total annual hours of sunshine in London is the least, at 1, 180 hours.
The line chart gives information about the mean
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temperature
per month in a
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year
while the table demonstrates the number of annual
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hours
of sunshine on average in London,
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New
York and Sydney.

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clear
that the
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of London and
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New
York is warmer in the middle of the
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year
while that of Sydney is the opposite and
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York's total annual lighting time is the highest.

It can be
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seen
that the
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temperature
in London is
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10ºC at the two months of the
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year
, which doubles that in
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York. After that, the figures for both countries rise
gradually
and hit a peak at 30ºC for
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New
York and approximately 24ºC for London in July
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showing a plunge until November with the same
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(
about 10%). Meanwhile, the
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in Sydney witness an opposite trend with a low of 15ºC in July and warming up at the beginning and the
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end
of the
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year
with around 25ºC.

In term of sunshine duration,
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New
York and Sydney have
relatively
similar figures with 2, 535 and 2, 473
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hours
,
respectively
while total annual
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hours
of sunshine in London is the least, at 1, 180
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hours
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IELTS academic The line chart gives information about the mean temperature per month in a year while the table demonstrates the number of annual hours of sunshine on average in London, New York and Sydney.

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