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The line chart depicts the figure of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear from the graph that, the number of visitors increased in the whole period.

The line chart depicts the figure of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear from the graph that, the number of visitors increased in the whole period. 6K5WK
According to what is shown, the number of tourists who stayed on the island increased from 750 thousand to 1. 5 million between 2011 and 2013, before it was leveled in the first year of the interval. In addition, it leveled again from 2013 to 2015 by 1. 5 million visitors. In the last two years of the period the number of visitors who stayed on the island dip at around 1. 2 million visitors and increased to reach 1. 5 million visitors in 2017. On the other hand, the number of tourists who stayed on cruise ships increased in the first year on the interval from 250 thousand to half million visitors. In the second year, the figure decreased by 250 thousand visitors which is the same number as this category of visitors in 2010. The tourists who stayed on cruise ships started to soar significantly from 2012 to the last year of the period by quarter million to two million visitors. To sum up, we could say that the number of tourists visiting the Caribbean island started from one million visitors to reach to 3. 5 million visitors which increased by 2. 5 million visitors.
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IELTS academic The line chart depicts the figure of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear from the graph that, the number of visitors increased in the whole period.

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