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The infographic depicts the entire process of recycling aluminum drink cans.

The infographic depicts the entire process of recycling aluminum drink cans. DVLmj

The infographic depicts the entire process of recycling aluminum drink cans. As is observed, there are basically four stages in the given illustration, beginning with the aluminum collection and ending with the emergence of output in a vending machine. Once trash is accumulated in recycling bins, aluminum cans are detected and sorted from those made of steel. Subsequently, lorries will collect and transport them to the recycling center. In here, they will undergo disposing process, starting with the block compression. In the following stages, a number of complex treatments will be implemented in sequential order to manufacture new products. In particular, aluminum blocks are liquefied under the high temperature of the oven, hence they will naturally condense into bar of aluminums. Once new aluminum has been created, it will be trimmed into thin rolls and shaped into brand-new usable cans. These outputs are later customized with logo and filled up with the fizzy drinks, becoming the common products sold in the vending machine.

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