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The bar chart shows the percentage of the male and the female ,who were able to pass their driving test in between period of 1980 ,and 2010 in an asian country. Overall,women proved far more better in driving skills , on the other hand men was least succesful.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the male and the female, who were able to pass their driving test in between period of 1980, and 2010 in an asian country. Overall, women proved far more better in driving skills, on the other hand men was least succesful. e3dbp
The bar chart shows the percentage of the male and the female, who were able to pass their driving test in between period of 1980, and 2010 in an asian country. Overall, women proved far more better in driving skills, on the other hand men was least succesful. in detail, among Ladies candidates passing rate was more than men. According to the graph, in 1980 almost 46% of women recieved the driving certificate. This ratio of women's further grow upto fifty percent in 1990, and During 2000, this percentages saw a sharp increase, At this particular year over 65% women took and passed the test. Year 2010 brought a slight fall in percentages for women; the ratio of certified women drivers decreased to nearly 63%. Opposite to women, men candidates with the passed driving certificate was mimumum, Although this side experienced improvement in numbers; 25% of men were counted to leagal driver in 1980. following five years, more than 35% of male drivers manage to pass. During 2000 and 2010, male stood up to be 49%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the percentage of the male and the female, who were able to pass their driving test in between period of 1980, and 2010 in an asian country. Overall, women proved far more better in driving skills, on the other hand men was least succesful.

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