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THE ILLUSTRATION SHOWS INFORMATION ABOUT HOW AN IGLOO IS BUILT FROM THE SNOW.

THE ILLUSTRATION SHOWS INFORMATION ABOUT HOW AN IGLOO IS BUILT FROM THE SNOW. Xln9g
The diagram illustrates how an igloo is built from snow. The process involves five main steps, beginning with finding a hard-packed snow zone and finishing with covering the igloo with snow blocks. At the first stage of the process, after a surface of hard-packed is found, snow blocks are cut into ideal size by a snow saw. Large blocks are used to build the base and the one which is slightly too large is suitable for the last opening on top. Keep using a saw to smooth the edges of the blocks and placing them in the circle. After that, digging a hole to make an entrance. In the next subsequent step, on the outside of the igloo, the snow is packed into all crevices after shoveling. On the other hand, the inside surface is smoothed by hand. Any extra snow is also removed. Finally, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance and which is covered by snow blocks.
The diagram illustrates how an igloo
is built
from snow.

The process involves five main steps, beginning with finding a
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hard
-packed
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snow
zone and finishing with covering the igloo with
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snow
blocks.

At the
first
stage of the process, after a surface of
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hard
-packed
is found
,
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snow
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blocks
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
into ideal size by a
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snow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
. Large
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blocks
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to build the base and the one which is
slightly
too large is suitable for the last opening on top.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Keep
using a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
to smooth the edges of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blocks
and placing them in the circle. After that, digging a hole to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an entrance.

In the
next
subsequent step, on the outside of the igloo, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
snow
is packed
into all crevices after shoveling.
On the other hand
, the inside surface
is smoothed
by hand. Any extra
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
snow
is
also
removed.
Finally
, a hole
is dug
in the shape of the entrance and which
is covered
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
snow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blocks
.
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IELTS academic THE ILLUSTRATION SHOWS INFORMATION ABOUT HOW AN IGLOO IS BUILT FROM THE SNOW.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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