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The illustration provides information about the process of collecting current and reliable weather predictions and then broadcasting this to mass people which are conducted by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.

The illustration provides information about the process of collecting current and reliable weather predictions and then broadcasting this to mass people which are conducted by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. As can be seen, this process needs some equipment to gather news forecasts and three main sources, such as satellite, radar, and the drifting buoy is used for gathering weather information. To begin with, the satellite is used to capture images of Australian weather from the outside of the planet. Meanwhile, radar can give screen pictures while a drifting buoy which is placed on the sea reveals a synoptic chart of the Australian climate. Subsequently, all of the information is investigated to know the real weather condition in Australia. After that, these data are put on the computer to prepare the report for the public broadcast. People will know the weather forecasts in Australia through various media, in particular, TV newsreader, radio, and recorded announcement.

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