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The given two tables illustrate people’s love towards potatoes production and consumption from various parts around the globe in year of 2006. The comparison between the consuming and producing of potatoes according the information stated particularly. Moreover, the six continents have separate type of manufacturing on basis of availability. Overall, the Europe has the highest rate of generating and utilizing potatoes for their needs(which is about to 96 to 126 percent). The remaining regions the data is fluctuating whereas Asia has minimal consumption plus production was up to greatest proportion(131 ratio). In addition, Africa has least rate of consumption among them. Firstly, North America has around 58 percent of consumption along with production value is equal to 25 percentage (the consuming rate was more than the production rate). After this the South and Central America was approximately 24 per centum together with production about to 16 percent. To conclusion, the Africa has less proportion of consumption value besides the production rate also smaller than other. So, finally altogether the Europe is more significant in both production and consumption based on provided details.
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from various parts around the globe in year of 2006.

The comparison between the consuming and producing of potatoes according the information stated
particularly
.
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, the six continents have separate type of manufacturing on basis of availability.

Overall
, the Europe has the highest
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rate
of generating and utilizing potatoes for their needs(which is about to 96 to 126 percent). The remaining regions the data is fluctuating whereas Asia has minimal
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consumption
plus
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was up to
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proportion(131 ratio).
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, Africa has
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of
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among them.

Firstly
, North America has around 58 percent of
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along with
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value is equal to 25 percentage (the consuming
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was more than the
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production
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rate)
. After this the South and Central America was approximately 24 per centum together with
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about to 16 percent.

To conclusion, the Africa has less proportion of
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consumption
value
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also
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altogether the Europe is more significant in both
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IELTS academic consumption and production of potatoes

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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