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COMPARE UNIVERSITY CAMPUS IN 2012 VS NOW

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The two maps show the changes that have been made to a university campus from the year 2010 up to the present. Overall, there are drastic changes that had happened with the facilities and some establishments were already removed or improved in size or numbers. One big change in the university campus was the changes in student accommodation facilities, as there already three big buildings currently compared to only two small buildings in 2010. Besides that, the university offices and teaching block were both changed into Science building and Arts building. This can help students or teachers have their own space for their subject. If they want to do art or science activities, separating the two buildings into another area will help them focus more easily. The shops and restaurant were relocated to a new building called Student facilities, which is precisely based where the small student accommodation building used to be. In addition, the lawn & seating area around the lake was removed, and a new road was made in front of it. Furthermore, the shops and restaurant to the east side of the lake were removed and was erected with a new student accommodation facility. Likewise, the lawn and seating area in the lake were removed.
The two maps
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changes
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to a university campus from the year 2010 up to the present.
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, there are drastic
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changes
that had happened with the facilities and
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some
establishments were already
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removed
or
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improved
in size or numbers.

One
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big
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change
in the university campus was the
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changes
in
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student
accommodation facilities, as there already three
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big
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buildings
currently
compared to
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only
two
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small
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buildings
in 2010.
Besides
that, the university offices and teaching block were both
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changed
into Science
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building
and Arts
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building
. This can
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help
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students
or teachers have their
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own
space for their subject. If they want to do art or science activities, separating the two
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buildings
into another area will
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help
them focus more
easily
.

The shops and restaurant
were relocated
to a new
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building
called
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Student
facilities, which is
precisely
based where the
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small
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student
accommodation
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building
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used
to be.
In addition
, the lawn & seating area around the lake was
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removed
, and a new road
was made
in front of it.

Furthermore
, the shops and restaurant to the east side of the lake were
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removed
and
was erected
with a new
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student
accommodation facility.
Likewise
, the lawn and seating area in the lake were
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removed
.

IELTS academic COMPARE UNIVERSITY CAMPUS IN 2012 VS NOW

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208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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