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The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. m1bOO
The pie chart illustrates the proportions of the qualification held by two groups of Canadian, which is divided into ages 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. Overall, there are more Canadians in age 25 to 35 than 45 to 55 who held a degree. Among all the studies, social science, arts have a higher proportion of Canadians holding a degree, the same as age 45 to 55. By contrast, the study of social science, arts is more than any others. In detail, it has increased by 1% from age 45 to 55. In particular, Canadians aged 45 to 55 prefer holding an engineering degree, and it's at 19%. In contrast to age 25 to 35, engineering has increased by 10%. As a result, administration, education, MBA and science, math computers have declined in age 45 to 55. On the contrary, social science, arts, nursing, humanities, and others have made their ascent.
The pie chart illustrates the proportions of the qualification held by two groups of Canadian, which
is divided
into
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ages
25 to 35 and 45 to 55.

Overall
, there are more Canadians in
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age
25 to 35 than 45 to 55 who held a degree.

Among all the studies, social
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science
, arts have a higher proportion of Canadians holding a degree, the same as
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age
45 to 55.

By contrast, the study of social
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science
, arts is more than any others. In detail, it has increased by 1% from
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age
45 to 55.
In particular
, Canadians aged 45 to 55 prefer holding an engineering degree, and it's at 19%.
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In
contrast to
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age
25 to 35, engineering has increased by 10%.

As a result
, administration, education, MBA and
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science
, math computers have declined in
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age
45 to 55.
On the contrary
, social
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science
, arts, nursing, humanities,
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and others
have made their ascent.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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