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The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

The two graphs exhibit the number of female and male employees in the Republic of Freedonia in 1975 and 1995 and show the exact distribution of workers between six sectors. Between these years, most of the data changed significantly, both in the general employee numbers and also in the female-male ratio within each employment sector. The non defence public sector, compared to the other sectors, has the biggest number of workers both in 1975 and also 1995 with 850 workers, this amount consisted of 650 females and 200 males in these two years. The defence public sector remained with the smallest number of workers, its overall number reduced slightly with significant change in the sex distribution; from being th minority in their sector in 1975, women incresed and constitutesd half of the workers of the defence public sector in 1995. Interistengly, numbers of the female and male manufacturing employees were the same in 1995 and 1975 with 300 workers in each gender. Turning to communcation sector, it saw the most signifcant increase. They rose from 300 workers in 1975 to 550 workers in 1995, and this rise significantly occurred due to the increase in the number of male workers within this sector.
The two graphs exhibit the
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number
of female and male employees in the Republic of
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Freedonia
in 1975 and 1995 and
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show
the exact distribution of
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workers
between six sectors.

Between these years, most of the data
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changed
significantly
, both in the general employee
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numbers
and
also
in the female-male ratio within each employment sector.

The non
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defence
public
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sector
, compared to the other
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sectors
, has the biggest
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number
of
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workers
both in 1975 and
also
1995 with 850
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workers
, this amount consisted of 650 females and 200
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males
in these two years. The
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defence
public
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sector
remained with the smallest
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number
of
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workers
, its
overall
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number
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reduced
slightly
with significant
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change
in the sex distribution; from being
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th
minority in their
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sector
in 1975, women
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incresed
and
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constitutesd
half of the
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workers
of the
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defence
public
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sector
in 1995.
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Interistengly
,
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numbers
of the female and male manufacturing employees were the same in 1995 and 1975 with 300
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workers
in each gender.

Turning to
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communcation
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sector
, it
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saw
the most
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signifcant
increase. They rose from 300
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workers
in 1975 to 550
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workers
in 1995, and this rise
significantly
occurred due to the increase in the
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number
of male
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workers
within this
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sector
.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

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