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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 2bKLo
The graph reflects that in the beginning of 1970's the train was the least used means of commuting while car was the highest. The bus managed to find its place between these two as it was the second most used means of transportation. Over the years we can see that car has been the most famous means of commuting because its use has been steadily increasing. However, between 1980 and 2000 the use of car has seen a steep growth and since 2000 it has been steady up untill 2020 where it is predicted to have another steep increase up untill 2030. The popularity of bus, however, is seen to be decreasing over the years and train is increasing its reach to the commuters. Shortly after 2010 we see that use of trains has overtaken the use of buses and since then trains have been the second most popular means of commuting. Also, it has been predicted that the use of car will further diminish and use of trains for commuting will further increase. By 2030, the number of cars will be around 9 million while the number of buses will go just below 3 milion while the number of trains will be in the neighbourhood of 6 million.
The graph reflects that in the beginning of
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1970's
the
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train
was the least
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used
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means
of commuting while
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car
was the highest. The bus managed to find its place between these two as it was the second most
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used
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means
of transportation. Over the years we can
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see
that
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car
has been the most
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famous
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means
of commuting
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because
its
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use
has been
steadily
increasing.
However
, between 1980 and 2000 the
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use
of
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car
has
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seen
a steep growth and since 2000 it has been steady up
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untill
2020 where it
is predicted
to have another steep increase up
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untill
2030.

The popularity of bus,
however
, is
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seen
to be decreasing over the years and
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train
is increasing its reach to the commuters. Shortly after 2010 we
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see
that
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use
of
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trains
has overtaken the
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use
of buses and since then
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trains
have been the second most popular
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means
of commuting.
Also
, it has
been predicted
that the
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use
of
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car
will
further
diminish and
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use
of
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trains
for commuting will
further
increase. By 2030, the number of
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cars
will be around 9 million while the number of buses will go
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just
below 3
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milion
while the number of
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trains
will be in the
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neighbourhood
of 6 million.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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209 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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