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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The line graphs illustrate the addmission of foreign students and native students in Australian universities in a decade. Overall, it is clearly seen that, the number of foreign students in australian universities was incresase, whereas local students preference was decline a ten year period. Looking for first line graph in more detail, in 2001 nearly 15000 students took addmission in Australian universities and this data was incline sharply to 40000 by 2010. In total, students form other countries were 20000 in 2001 which increase considerably and reached 80000 by 2010

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