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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. RE7W
The graph illustrate the enrolments of overseas students and local students from 2001 to 2010 in Australian universities. Overall, the number of overseas students in 2001 was 20000 and the highest number of students in 2010 was 80000. The enrolment of local students in 2001 was 4 lakh and it can be seen 6 lakh in 2010. In 2001 the strating of enrolment of overseas student was 20000 and than rose steadily over nine year and reach 80000 in 2010. In the following year the enrolment spped up after 2004. The local students enrolment in 2001 was 4 lakh that was too much greater than overseas. After 2001 it was rised to 6 lakh in year of 2007 and from 2007 to 2010 it was similar and there was no changes in number. This shows that the enrolment of local students are greater than the overseas students in Australain students
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and
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from 2001 to 2010 in Australian universities.

Overall
, the number of
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overseas
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students
in 2001 was 20000 and the highest number of
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in 2010 was 80000. The
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of
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students
in 2001 was 4
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and it can be
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6
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in 2010.

In 2001 the
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of
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was 20000 and
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rose
steadily
over nine year and reach 80000 in 2010. In the following year the
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up after 2004.

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in 2001 was 4
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that was too much greater than
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. After 2001 it was
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to 6
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in year of 2007 and from 2007 to 2010 it was similar and there was no
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changes
in number. This
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that the
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are greater than the
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in
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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