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Natural Gas Production and Distribution system

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The diagram provides an illustration of how the natural gas is produced and the channels and means used to distribute the same to the customer. Overall, it can be seen that 3 major components form the complete diagram namely Production, Storage and Transportation. Natural gas can be obtained from either Gas well or Oil well. These, depending on their origin, are further processed at a Gas Plant or at a Refinery. The gas formed from both combined together is stored in underground storage called "Main storage" along with gases imported. These gases are then transported to regional storages through pipelines. The gas is then moved to the retailer's storage using tankers with the capacity to hold 40, 000 litres of gas and wagons with 24, 000-liters capacity. The retailer has a maximum capacity of collecting 120, 000 liters of gas for further supply. The retailer then sells the gas ahead to retail customers with delivery trucks with a capacity of 12, 000 litres
The diagram provides an illustration of how the natural
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gas
is produced
and the channels and means
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used
to distribute the same to the customer.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that 3 major components form the complete diagram
namely
Production,
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Storage
and Transportation. Natural
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gas
can
be obtained
from either
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Gas
well or Oil well. These, depending on their origin, are
further
processed at a
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Gas
Plant or at a Refinery. The
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gas
formed from both
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combined together
is stored
in underground
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storage
called
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"
Main storage
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"
along with gases imported. These gases are then transported to regional
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storages
through pipelines. The
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gas
is then
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moved
to the retailer's
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storage
using tankers with the
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capacity
to hold 40, 000
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litres
of
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gas
and wagons with 24,
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000-liters
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capacity
. The retailer has a maximum
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capacity
of collecting 120, 000 liters of
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gas
for
further
supply.
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The
retailer then sells the
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gas
ahead to retail customers with delivery trucks with a
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capacity
of 12, 000
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litres
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IELTS academic Natural Gas Production and Distribution system

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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