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The graph shows percentage of transport preference among young people

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The graph shows percentage of transport preference among young people. The statistics given in the graph were collected from different countries. Overall, the most preferred mean of transport among all the counties is car. The least popular transport is motorcycle. The amount of young people who mostly choose bicycle as the most preferred transport ranges depending on the country. According to the graph, in both Great Britain and USA the amount of teenagers who prefer cars to other transport equals 60%. The highest percentage of car preference is in France. Germany is the only country where bicycles are more popular than cars. In contrast, both France and Britain have the lowest amount of motorcycle popularity with young people which equals 10%. The only country where young people choose motorcycles rather than bicycles is Germany.
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. The statistics
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different
countries.

Overall
, the most preferred mean of
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transport
among all the counties is
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car
. The least popular
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transport
is motorcycle. The amount of
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young
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people
who
mostly
choose bicycle as the most preferred
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transport
ranges depending on the country.

According to the graph, in both Great Britain and USA the amount of
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teenagers
who prefer
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cars
to other
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transport
equals 60%. The highest percentage of
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car
preference is in France. Germany is the
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only
country where bicycles are more popular than
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cars
.
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, both France and Britain have the lowest amount of motorcycle popularity with
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young
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people
which equals 10%. The
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country where
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young
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choose motorcycles
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than bicycles is Germany.
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