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the diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and plan for its future development

the given map illustrates existing plan of an office building and how it will be transfer in futureoverall, the grass area of an office will be completely changed in future. although number of offices remain same in future planIn current layout, offices are on the south side opposite to kitchen, canteen and stock room. As per future plan kitchen and canteen will replaced by two offices. Stock room planned to remain intact in future. building has grass area in East and West side and a washroom and Reception area are adjacent to Eastern grass area. In future, coffee machine and meeting area will be in East side at place of grass area. while Western grass land would be used for outdoor activities. Reception area move in middle of two offices in Southern section.
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layout,
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are on the south side opposite to kitchen, canteen and stock room. As per
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plan kitchen and canteen will
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. Stock room planned to remain intact in
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in East and West side and a washroom and Reception
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are adjacent to Eastern
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. In
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, coffee machine and meeting
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will be in East side at place of
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Western
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IELTS academic the diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and plan for its future development

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